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pg 5, "Nico-chan is in a higher year", maybe "Nico-chan is a year older" pg 5, "it's necessary tilt the face", "it's necessary to tilt the face" pg 10, "Eli and her", who? would sound better if it said, "Eli and Nozomi"

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